Lal P.

I paid for this essay to think it was actually good but it's worse than my previous essays? I said to do resilience in the book "strangers" and it describes characters that were never seen before?
Such as "Gabriel" like who is gabriel? He was never mentioned in the WHOLE entire book?

Next problem is " what is this?
"for himself. It's all about young men fighting back at their tormentors, and the strength of indigenous people. In the process of rebuilding himself and finding purpose in life, he accepts his ancestry and meets others who have trod where he steps. "

No way would anyone type that he never met any other person and it sounds so bad.

Another problem is I put a college essay right? WHO USES "Because" IN A COLLEGE ESSAY? The essay has childish grammar with also saying "this essay" like you're not supposed to say that it also has issues with trc and undrip since some of the information he said such as "pursued under UNDRIP principles such as healing rights--reconciliation vs recognition? "
What do you mean by reconciliation vs recognition?

He also uses the wrong gender for Cole using Her "Cole documents many cases which suggest how the paths taken by the two side in her chapter"